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i drew my heart with dry erase marker

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i drew my heart with dry erase marker
(wet red curvature inking it sharper)
soil sand earth glass
the boards we use for graphs in economics class.

Gold and blood(both dirty and clean)
circulate hungry and far between
they follow their guilty they point their blame
water honey roses flame

teacher laughed(but history read
that in the long run we're all dead 
earth glass soil sand)
burn our coal and sell the land

block by day and book by page
i grin your glee i wreck your rage
cloud by sky and star by night
my heart it often sleeps in spite

drawings washed off permanent
grinned their mess and did their stint
(breathe wait soap and then)they
said their prayers they went to sea

roses flame water honey
(and only the sky can be blue before dark
when wavelength signature is clever is better
wet red curvature inking it sharper)

some day certain hearts missed a beat
(and burning pleased to skip my reach)
science spun me higher inch by inch
dust by dust and word by word

bone by bone and deed by deed
and life by life they eat their greed
good fun and everyone seethes by envy
lust by wrath and sloth by pride.

Gold and blood(both slick and oil)
sand earth glass soil
pointed their follows and spilled their shame
water honey roses flame
Day Five of NaPoWriMo/gliitchmonth!  :iconnapowrimo:   :icongliitchmonth:

This is also my entry for the Week One Challenge, which was to select a poet and try to write with similar style. I chose e. e. cummings, because I adore his lyricism and the whimsy in his poems. What I wrote is directly based on the piece anyone lived in a pretty how town and I hope you like how it turned out because I sure do!


Notes:
- yes, the first stanza comes from real life and my economics class (which I really enjoy)
- "in the long run we're all dead" is a quote from Keynes about the fact that markets will correct themselves back to equilibrium in the long run but that doesn't mean we ought to do nothing in times of problematic disequilibrium because the long run is an indefinite measure of time
- does this count as free verse? with lilting rhythm and half-spineless structured rhyme scheme?
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